the only reason I am even giving this grade is that people on this website seem to review it so that it can just have a high grade and the reason for that is " the first wmw ff" which is not true, if you do some research you can find some out there before this one. sooo yea... my grades would be: writing: 3, because it has improved writing along with the chapters and that's the most important. stability of updates: 5 because there is always a chapter almost every day so this is a good point. Story development: 2, copy-paste... Character Design; 2, no changes... World background: 2, is taken from the original so... so these are my grade with an average of 2.8 almost 3, strong points: updates every day, author improving his writing skills. weak points: stolen story development, no character design, and previously set world background. I am dropping the fic because I feel like I'm reading the original all over again, but you can do whatever you want after reading this review, just my opinion. but if you just don't care about it then ignore this review. I guess that even the original author was called the plagiarist so I won't talk much of him. This fanfic is copypaste with a few minor changes, that's all that I can say. nothing much to say that could improve the story, maybe original arcs when the story progresses? I think it wouldn't be that bad to try something different, but it will be hard now from the point of the story is now. I tried to be fair and not give a rate less than 1 because that's the same as no effort, which I would disagree, I think some of the critics would agree with me but most are just dropping due to bicky's stuff, which I also found it quite weird. If you find that I have been unfair in my review please feel free to express your opinion in the comments. just wish the author the best.
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LIKEJimmyBlah:Np, also for a free novel it seriously isnāt that bad compared to the vast manority on the site š
JimmyBlah:Jsyk thereās literally an entire new arc in a new world after he leaves the coastā¦ and it gets better after š
Np, also for a free novel it seriously isnāt that bad compared to the vast manority on the site š
APTV:thx bro, i will check it