Review Detail of TenserHtoo in WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

I really like the Novel since i love Warlock Of The Magus World. I always wanted to read a fanfiction of it with a little cheat for Leylin which you did. The MC you created is not a cringy one so that's a good thing. Keep up the good work and i hope you don't dropped this because i believe your novel is a good one and has a lot of potential. Don't let people who don't like your work influence instead listen to those who like and people who give advice(criticism) to make your novel better.