Review Detail of leylin_slytherin in WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

Well , firstly I am a huge fan of WMW tooo ! Its really great that you are writing a fan-fic for it. Its understandable that the MC is more promiscuous since he has Shi Yan's ability from god of slaughter novel , so ignore those reviews blasting you for it afterall haters will hate . But during the later chapters (30-50) , The MC seems to have affections towards his maid , Bicky etc . Its almost as if he is going soft and you do not seem to like the idea of not happy endings for side characters . Might I remind you that MW is a dog eat dog world , where there is almost no place for affection . If the MC is as soft as you portray what is he going to do in the twilight .. arc ?(please don't drop it) also you should explain shi yan's ability properly , cause not all of the read GoS . Its really good for your first novel ,looking forward to it .please don't drop it