Review Detail of VictorRust2410 in WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
Review detail
This was an enjoyable fic for the first twenty five or so chapters. The grammar suddenly improved in the middle of the story which was great and the author said he would be diverging from cannon pretty soon, so i was really looking forward to this. unfortunately, this fic went from promising to boring pretty fast. I was starting to enjoy the fic when Bloodbath arc happened. the mc transformed from cold cannon leylin to an anime hero. he decides to start playing with his opponents and suddenly develops feelings for a character he had only slept with once, and even that non-seriously. if you want the mc to behave like a love-struck fool atleast pick a better character than bicky who is being banged by another guy, for f*cks sake! as for the plot, the less said the better. it's literally a copy of the original without any changes. its fine to follow canon in the start but when a fanfic follows the same plot like original even after 50 chapters? yeah, the dude's delusional to call himself an author. he literally copy pasted entire paragraphs from the original fic, I'm not even exaggerating cause i double checked it. the only reason it's even gaining any readers is due to the fact that it's the only serious wmw fanfic right now. maybe I'm being too harsh and the dude's just writing for his own pleasure then as a serious fic, but it hurts to see so much potential vanish like this.
WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
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there are multiple times mc said he has feelings for her and i remember him saying something like "how dare you harm bicky! you shoul die for that!"....i dont remember exactly, it's been over a week i last read but i think it was in bloodbath arc. so yeah, it was incredibly irritating reading through that considering he has future knowledge and can get much powerful and loyal servants than bicky without going out of his way to help them like he did for bicky. it's like authors got a boner for her or something which colours our mcs decisions regarding her. again, extremely irritating.
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so what? this is story about a guy who got reincarnated into leylin, not about leylin(I don't remember his original name in novel) time travelling into his past self.
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FalseProphet_:I think he only truly cared for his first wife in the central whatever forgot the name
why do you say he doesn't care about them ?.I personally am finishing this novel Warlock of the Magus World , towards the end of the war of the magus and the gods. Leylin Farlier ordered several nightmare lords to protect these two sons.
FalseProphet_:Not really
Well, he cares about them just not in a family way the only person he even slightly risked his life for was his first wife and nobody else. He needs his kids to build up his clan because he wanted to have the strongest warlock family or something along those lines but he doesn't love them and he might even kill them if it meant achieving more power faster.
Herohero:why do you say he doesn't care about them ?.I personally am finishing this novel Warlock of the Magus World , towards the end of the war of the magus and the gods. Leylin Farlier ordered several nightmare lords to protect these two sons.
The dude writing the review is lying entirely. MC never falls in love with anyone and sees them at best as tools of pleasure and only slightly favors them but that too is just as a tool for his future endeavors. Read the book, trust me.
Detached_Sentiment:Thanks for your review, I don't think I'm going to read this at all. The only reason why I read WMW was for Leylin's character.
I mean, considering 90 people agree with me and more than a dozen dropped the fic due to similar reasons, I'd say calling me a liar is stupid but whatever. You do you.
Slyyle:The dude writing the review is lying entirely. MC never falls in love with anyone and sees them at best as tools of pleasure and only slightly favors them but that too is just as a tool for his future endeavors. Read the book, trust me.
Slyyle:The dude writing the review is lying entirely. MC never falls in love with anyone and sees them at best as tools of pleasure and only slightly favors them but that too is just as a tool for his future endeavors. Read the book, trust me.
