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Review Detail of Poolitzer in WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

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Poolitzer
PoolitzerLv63yrPoolitzer

writing quality is good. now the negativ. there is no world building, character progress or story design. author does not descripe the world, the characters or the adventure. everything is a summary! example: he just uses names for characters and puts them there. no explaining who who is, what does people do or anything. they are just names that pop up once and vanish without knowing anything about them. his world is not build. he did read the OG then assumes we all do parallel to his story and jumps around explains nothing and skips anx and all explanation and world building. ergo: read the OG story or you wont understand this one. the question is now: why even read this ff? nothing knew just worse and some other mc. not worth the read.

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WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

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fish1234
fish1234Lv13fish1234

then quit the ff man,this ff is for us WMW fans

leylin_slytherin
leylin_slytherinLv4leylin_slytherin

@fish1234 I concur

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

Then you are a bad fan if you disrespect WMW with this crap.

fish1234:then quit the ff man,this ff is for us WMW fans
Chonchonm
ChonchonmLv11Chonchonm

I believe this fanfic is written under the assumption that the readers would've already read the original wotmw since this was under the category of "fan fiction"