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JohnWickCat
JohnWickCatLv121yrJohnWickCat

dropped at chapter 61. the story have a lot of potential but the story become unbearable that forced to stop reading when the time skip begin. at the end of the arch of the sisters trial instead exploring the interesting development that already exist, author for no reasonable reason at all yeeted his character to other unknown places setting up other characters that have no relation to development that already exist in the story. and what make the dissapointed more is how out of character the characters react of the sudden dissappearance of the mc of their live and that make development and the flow of the story seem forceful and illogical, instead natural and logical one. overall, it's a story with a lot of potential but the baffling decision of the author in how he/she developed the story is maddening and wasted the potential.

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The Conquerors Path

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TryingToBeNice
TryingToBeNiceLv13TryingToBeNice

Bye friend hope you find another novel you liking out there ✊

ysian
ysianLv2ysian

Well you can't say those other characters don't have anything to do with the story because at the start, its clearly stated he NEEDS to prevent any female leads to be with the game's protagonist or the god who sent him would send his soul to eternal suffering. Plus he sent his mother a letter to explain why he was going away.