Truthfully The writing quality is bad. Since the author is writing only as a hobby I won't be too harsh. The plot isn't good it contains a few plotholes and since writing quality is bad it's hard to sometimes make out what the author wants to say. Character description is subpar. No updates stability since the author writes when he has time. World Background - Other than a general overview it's blank I would say. And author doesn't read the comments so don't put an effort to mention typos.
Chaosking
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LIKEYeh, that Celestinia thing was definitely a retcon, in c155-c159, it was clear from his pov that that was Austin's 1st time meeting her, suddenly in 325 onwards, they have this big backstory together He even said "The only problem is how to make her share me, yeah i thought about it and i gave up, i couldn't think of a way" in c159, which turns out to be a fkn lie
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