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JustNovelreader
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To be honest it really had potential but what ruined the story was the carefree emotionless scenes like the time when assassins attacked them in mansion and his father was left behind it was taken too lightly. Not to offend but it feels bland and emotionless then suddenly a 4 years girls thinking creeps me out it's not like a kid at all. Even more so when protagonist accepts the surrounding acts as it was ment to be natural also how skills were given how he correlates magic and mana were neglected 😔. Just that it doesn't delve in to mechanics or workings or even curiosity that humans have towards new things. Another thing is when mc mom sees him fall from cradle and throw a book on top of himself there reaction doesn't feel natural. Hope u improve in the aspects which I felt were lacking. Well thank you from a complete novel though.

How I Became the Strongest Sovereign

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TofSpades
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Thank you for the review, the initial inexperience really showed at the start of the novel. I will definitely fix these issues in my upcoming novel.

JustNovelreader
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Looking forward to it