Review Detail of EndlessSpeed in Akatsuki & Fate Over Everything: All Hail Akatsuki-Sama!
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Why so arrogant? Haha just for that I’ll leave a review. Lets see how this will go. I’ll probably change the review depending if its good or not. It better not disappoint :)
Akatsuki & Fate Over Everything: All Hail Akatsuki-Sama!
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Honestly i just skimmed through the synopsis. And when i read “im better than most authors in grammar” I laughed cause it reminded me of someone. Anyways you’re technically not wrong about that either, most authors here on webnovel aren’t pretty good.
Akatsuki_God:Was I arrogant? Or was I not clear enough that it was sarcasm?image
Akatsuki_God:Lol!😂 I just noticed I read your fanfic about Sasuke in My Hero Academy! So Author to Author got any ti**?image
Hmm i dont really have anything to say. Other than organize what you’re going to write. Your grammar is pretty good, although there are a couple of errors which you could easily fix. Hmm also try to write longer, especially when most people criticize it. Try to not add a bunch of things in one chapter, since i got lost on what i was reading about in chapter 3. There will be people who see the picture of your fanfic and just read. They wont know what it’s about, so try to write where the mc is in the beginning. Anyways you’re doing great, way better than i ever had. Good luck!
Akatsuki_God:Lol!😂 I just noticed I read your fanfic about Sasuke in My Hero Academy! So Author to Author got any ti**?image