Review Detail of Marcel_0523 in Fox in an inverted world

I like the novel feels like something new. Pro: nice characters Interesting Story yanderes big + for me Contra:Way to many he/she/we/you and others mistakes really easy to fix to improve the reading experience. A bit slow progress/age growing for me. Overall i keep reading the story,but author maybe led some one help you?many chapters could be easy fixed in less than 10 minits.