this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]
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LIKETheComedy_Mask:really good i see now that this isn't the same plot thanks for telling me man as thank you I'll guve some evil mc novels lord of glory and questioning heaven these are both extreme evil mc novels enjoy
but after saving her did he not kill her because he enjoy other suffering (the kind of mc i like) also did he not destory her family and take all the her family possession the orginal would not have not it
TheComedy_Mask:he's not he will still help people if given the chance which contradicts what villain should do like bicky he coulvd'vegotten himself a lot more time by not helping her or avenging but he's doing the same mistake he did in the original
panda343:but after saving her did he not kill her because he enjoy other suffering (the kind of mc i like) also did he not destory her family and take all the her family possession the orginal would not have not it
panda343:but after saving her did he not kill her because he enjoy other suffering (the kind of mc i like) also did he not destory her family and take all the her family possession the orginal would not have not it
TheComedy_Mask:i dropped when he saved so he killed her and stole from her
panda343:but after saving her did he not kill her because he enjoy other suffering (the kind of mc i like) also did he not destory her family and take all the her family possession the orginal would not have not it
TheComedy_Mask:he's not he will still help people if given the chance which contradicts what villain should do like bicky he coulvd'vegotten himself a lot more time by not helping her or avenging but he's doing the same mistake he did in the original