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KonoSuba rip-off that is less funny. All the party members are useless some skills are identical mc is a coward that uses a bow and his wish has proven to be quite useless.
Here I Am In This RPG World
Haroldtigre
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also, thanks for the review. It was pretty mean but, at lest you are honest. If you don't like it, I can't actually say anything. I just wanted to write a story of mine just similar to konosuba. I admit it's kind of a rip-off. But, I'll keep on writing this story. That's my only wish for writing this story.
Well you're welcome I guess... Also I am a KonoSuba fan and this novel is, as I sayd very similar tho it lacks the comedic aspects. The mc didnt die an embarrassing death, he didnt get a comedic companion for his wish, his fights aren't funny, they are dark/serious, you dont really write enough slice of life scenes that would fill this novel with comedy and set the theme, his party members have their quicks yet they aren't funny enough. A girl that has a head injury and becomes a small scared girl after wasting her mana isn't anywhere as funny as a girl who refuses to use anything other then an explosion spell with her whole mana capacity and bejng dead tired after that. The thief girl? She's a kleptomaniac thats embarased when cought but pretty dumb and arrogant when nothing is happening has potential. My advice? Dont try to imitate KonoSuba write something completely original and if not... write a fanfic or something this is a weird mix of both.
Haroldtigre:also, thanks for the review. It was pretty mean but, at lest you are honest. If you don't like it, I can't actually say anything. I just wanted to write a story of mine just similar to konosuba. I admit it's kind of a rip-off. But, I'll keep on writing this story. That's my only wish for writing this story.
Thank you for the info. But I will still, continue to write this story. I know this is not good as Konosuba, I was hoping to make an original story but it ended uo like Konosuba. I too am a konosuba fan and I understand the fact that the characters are not good as konosuba. But still, I want to continue my story. At lest, support me with that? I'll be glad if you do. Thank you.
uSeer:Well you're welcome I guess... Also I am a KonoSuba fan and this novel is, as I sayd very similar tho it lacks the comedic aspects. The mc didnt die an embarrassing death, he didnt get a comedic companion for his wish, his fights aren't funny, they are dark/serious, you dont really write enough slice of life scenes that would fill this novel with comedy and set the theme, his party members have their quicks yet they aren't funny enough. A girl that has a head injury and becomes a small scared girl after wasting her mana isn't anywhere as funny as a girl who refuses to use anything other then an explosion spell with her whole mana capacity and bejng dead tired after that. The thief girl? She's a kleptomaniac thats embarased when cought but pretty dumb and arrogant when nothing is happening has potential. My advice? Dont try to imitate KonoSuba write something completely original and if not... write a fanfic or something this is a weird mix of both.
one other thing, this is the first volume, this meant to be a type of tutorial of the mc. Once I finish chapter 11, I'll try my best to improve it. Hope you understand.
uSeer:Well you're welcome I guess... Also I am a KonoSuba fan and this novel is, as I sayd very similar tho it lacks the comedic aspects. The mc didnt die an embarrassing death, he didnt get a comedic companion for his wish, his fights aren't funny, they are dark/serious, you dont really write enough slice of life scenes that would fill this novel with comedy and set the theme, his party members have their quicks yet they aren't funny enough. A girl that has a head injury and becomes a small scared girl after wasting her mana isn't anywhere as funny as a girl who refuses to use anything other then an explosion spell with her whole mana capacity and bejng dead tired after that. The thief girl? She's a kleptomaniac thats embarased when cought but pretty dumb and arrogant when nothing is happening has potential. My advice? Dont try to imitate KonoSuba write something completely original and if not... write a fanfic or something this is a weird mix of both.
Haroldtigre:Thank you for the info. But I will still, continue to write this story. I know this is not good as Konosuba, I was hoping to make an original story but it ended uo like Konosuba. I too am a konosuba fan and I understand the fact that the characters are not good as konosuba. But still, I want to continue my story. At lest, support me with that? I'll be glad if you do. Thank you.
uSeer:Eh, that was my advice you are free to do anything you like. I wish you the best.
uSeer:Eh, that was my advice you are free to do anything you like. I wish you the best.
I will continue reading at least until the 15th chapter then I'm going to either drop and leave my review as is or change it and continue reading.
Haroldtigre:Are you gonna stop reading?
uSeer:I will continue reading at least until the 15th chapter then I'm going to either drop and leave my review as is or change it and continue reading.image
uSeer:I will continue reading at least until the 15th chapter then I'm going to either drop and leave my review as is or change it and continue reading.image
uSeer:I will continue reading at least until the 15th chapter then I'm going to either drop and leave my review as is or change it and continue reading.image
I won't bullshit you, the story didn't improve much. The characters are bland the dialogue between them is weird, it's as if they have no personality most of the time, they just describe whats happening and what they see/feel. Could you even describe their characteristics? I know I couldn't lol.
Haroldtigre:How is it now?
alright. from next volume, this volume is finished now just gonna write a epilouge on chapter 13. From next volume that starts from 14, I will try my best to add their characterictics. I was in pretty stress so couldn't write very well. Thank you for telling the feedback.
uSeer:I won't bullshit you, the story didn't improve much. The characters are bland the dialogue between them is weird, it's as if they have no personality most of the time, they just describe whats happening and what they see/feel. Could you even describe their characteristics? I know I couldn't lol.
i know the story is still not good enough but it's alright. you can keep the review. but i do like to know some feedback. thank you.
uSeer:I won't bullshit you, the story didn't improve much. The characters are bland the dialogue between them is weird, it's as if they have no personality most of the time, they just describe whats happening and what they see/feel. Could you even describe their characteristics? I know I couldn't lol.