Review Detail of marianela_arebalo_7450 in Through the Multiverse
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Just one tip: you could make a chapter at the beginning, where you would put the worlds you visit, the girls, what you will do, so that what comes next is not lost, several readers always get lost when names appear or forget it, it would be better for him reader and for you put the names of important people and their girls.
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resistingsea:Like before each volume if not, do you mean a auxiliary chaper in the beginning?
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resistingsea:Like before each volume if not, do you mean a auxiliary chaper in the beginning?