Story seems promising, though i only read the 2 available chapters. I reccomend you use Grammarly as it helps with grammar mistakes, which there are a few. I like how he is an OC(original character) and i of course like that its Harry Potter fanfic. I just hope he doesnt become a follower of harry, dumbledore or anyone else and that he is neither a person who thinks only of *** nor a person who has no emotions, empathy and such. I look forward to seeing this story develop!
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