The grammar is pretty terrible, only made it to chapter 6 there is a mistake in just about every sentence. story did seem promising though, sadly the english isn’t good and couldnt stand it.
Juarez_Culau
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LIKEIf you have enough money you could find some one who speaks fluent english and get them to edit or try and find some one who enjoys the novel and says thay will do it
Juarez_Culau:Thanks for your review. As I said in the synopsis, I was learning English and I learned a lot, yet is hard to have some extra time to get back and fix the early chapters. Could you read one of the late chapters and tell me what you think about the grammar there?