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writing quality 5 star- I think this is a great story!!! The writing is good. the writing is understandable, and I don't see any mistake in writing. story development 5 star- story development is clear and we know what we should know. we also know that we are going to cry from it. the characters' design 3 star - sadly, ( in my opinion ) i think their design is not satisfying. I know and understand the reason why the omega has small and frail body is because he didn't get proper meal. I don't hate it, but I just can't feel the excitement during the humpty dumpty scene because of the big size difference. The alpha is 28 which is a good age, sadly he can't get it up. "I believe this is why he's so cranky". The omega, luckily has passed the legal age at 19. I just wish he cuts his hair shorter( i only read until chapter 5). I don't really like a girly appearance for bottom because, my taste is (top looking but is actually a bottom × gentle, harmless looking but is actually a top). The updating stability and the world background is good in my opinion. I give them 5 stars.

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He Hates Me, He Loves Me Not

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thank you for the review! funny enough, your taste between pairings fits the couple on my other story (tough bottom × shy, awkward top) but it's on hiatus rn 😅 maybe check it out some day when i find the time to revamp the story