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Review Detail of CannibalTurtle in Tenth Life of a House Cat

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It was a pleasant read. The story lends itself to the probability of having a good world-building pace in the future. The characters themselves were interesting and it was fairly well written. There is good conciseness in word usage. With that said, there is room for improvement in terms of grammar and pacing of paragraphs. The paragraphs need to appear cleaner so readers can read more easily. I would suggest downloading Grammarly since authors are susceptible to grammar mistakes. Trust me, it takes your writing to a whole new level. Overall, it is a solid story with good potential. Keep up the good work!

Tenth Life of a House Cat

Necroghan

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FAYSALAHMED5058
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Cute boots😝😝 Like the way you have presented the book. Good job. But i need more chapter asap. Keep writing mate. Love the interaction between cat

Necroghan
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Thank you! I will take your words on board and try to make my paragraphs more digestible in the future!