Review Detail of Lethal_Drinker in Reborn into the Transformer Universe
Review detail
Writing Quality- Grammar is atrocious, but still tolerable. The place mc is raised in is Britain yet there is no British vernacular found in the novel just the Chinese, japanese and asian vernacular the isn't even trying. Story Development- don't know where it's going there is no motivation displayed by the mc he's just going with flow and the story introduced cultivation so... it's going down hill. Just added shadow clone as well so... how it's not shown. Then the mc is making vibranium which is illogical and simply not possible because there is only one person in existence who unraveled the secrets of vibranium and how to make it and his name is Dr. Doom and he became a god after achieving it. The novel is riddled with bs, plot holes and stupidity. Like how can a person running a company in a consumer electronics sector, which is both popular and successful and no one knows about it yeah the author is writing a Chinese cultivation novel. Character Design- shallow and non existent which isn't a problem most novel on this app are such but we don't even know how mc looks. Updating Stability- so so World background- non existent The idea is very good the wishes are great just the rest of novel disappoints. Just posting honest opinion I have no intention to insult you or discourage you. It's just an opinion not a fact so it's worthless take it or don't.
Reborn into the Transformer Universe
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im picking a fight after 3 years. how do you still not mature over that span of 3 years? you still trashtalking writers of their works. get a life and learn to chill and stop acting like a btch.
SageOfSins:ohhh dude... get a life, why do u pick a fight after three days ??? fucking dweeb...
dude you cant just say that to someone even if they really do or don't have talent. at least the dude tried to make a story right? and he still managed to make people read it. and i may not have read it yet but i don't think it would be anymore worse than Chinese fanfic mtl now would it?
CandyChopper:That's just simple author does not have talent.
what the **** has that got to do with u??? people like u, who just gets emotional over others comments or questions are the ones who I hate the most... bro...**** ur shit out cause if the author is effected by this comments then he, himself has his fingers to type... so **** off
Abordoaj:dude you cant just say that to someone even if they really do or don't have talent. at least the dude tried to make a story right? and he still managed to make people read it. and i may not have read it yet but i don't think it would be anymore worse than Chinese fanfic mtl now would it?
dude wtf? i just said to not tell people things like that since not everyone really has the talent. which part of my comment made you say i was emotional? are you a kid? cause why cant you talk calmly? i never insulted you or the author. I didnt even try to protect the author. all im saying is why be mean to someone who tried to write a story? even if the story sucked or something you could have just say it normally and not complain like a btch, right? yes it doesnt have anything to do with me. i just like to comment. and you said you hate people who react emotionally to questions or comments. so, do you hate yourself? its ironic how you say that to others but you yourself does what you hate dont you?
and i just saw your other comments and replies to other works and i must say that was something. keep bragging about hating people who reacts emotionally to others comments, replies, or question's but in the end all i saw in your profile was insulting the works they did or just straight up complaining like a btch about everything. so much for hating people like that huh?
SageOfSins:what the **** has that got to do with u??? people like u, who just gets emotional over others comments or questions are the ones who I hate the most... bro...**** ur shit out cause if the author is effected by this comments then he, himself has his fingers to type... so **** off
oh since when did saying something true calmly a tantrum? you cant talk sht now cant you? heh you didnt even reply to my comment so I wont see this did you? well someone liked my "tantrum" about you so I saw this. keep telling yourself that your right.
SageOfSins:lol ur tantrum is very funny
SageOfSins:what the **** has that got to do with u??? people like u, who just gets emotional over others comments or questions are the ones who I hate the most... bro...**** ur shit out cause if the author is effected by this comments then he, himself has his fingers to type... so **** off
valient_vicky:After reading it i don't know whether it is Sci-fic or romance novel.[img=faceslap]
