Review Detail of Quadser in War of the Races

Thank you so much. I appreciate the feed back. I am trying to crank out the chapters as fast as I can. Not to make excuses, but rather to explain my circumstances; I work full time 40-45 hours a week and write in the evening after work, but also while working during breaks, lunch, stops, and pretty much anytime I am not driving or with a customer. However, some time life just won't let me write. Then there is also down time when I am burned out and can't think at all anymore, and family time. Anyway, I have 4 book I started posting here, and revising them took a lot more of my time and effort that I thought it would. I have 3 more stories percolating in my head as well, but I have stopped work on all of them so that I can work on War of the Races and The Family Garden. I am now literally writing a chapter for one story then turning around and writing a chapter for the other. Then they have to be proofread and edited. So, I will endeavor to keep up the quality of the story first, and then speed up the release time. Thank you to all of you that love this story as much as I do, and thank you for your patience!