The story is written in such a comical way iits very intriguing. I got hooked from the first chapters and the development of the characters has a nice pace to it. I would recommend delving a bit into scenic descriptions to immerse the readers more, but that's just my opinion. Overall its such a great job!!! I look forward to more updates đđ
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