Review Detail of Lexi_Roberson in Asura Conqueror

I found that your world background was very well descriptive, and I like that it was. I also like how you were just overall descriptive in general. I also love the character development at the beginning with Marcus and the girl. I do love how you designed your writing techquines. I did have trouble with the dialogue though at the very beginning. I am not used to that type of setting. I would recommend checking that. I honestly thought this story was very captivating and very intriguing. Good job to the author!!! Good luck in the future, I've added this book to my library!! This is also the user from the forum, BellsandLexShow!!!