Review Detail of Adwaid_Nambiar in Trapped in a mansion with my 19 other classmates.

I think it was a pretty bold move to write this in first person while there are like 19 characters in it, so I would appreciate that. I feel that the start was a bit rushed in, things got to move pretty fast which I believe there could have been a build up, and as it's just 6 chapters all the mistakes can be forgiven, but that doesn't mean you should work on improving things! I like the way you gave a detailed synopsis of the characters also as you introduced them in beginning. I am also liking the way story is slowly unfolding, and I am looking forward to upcoming chapters!