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keanu_eugene
keanu_eugeneAuthor3yrkeanu_eugene

Hi there Author here, the auxiliary chapter explains what makes this story an AU story. This is a fun story but I will be treating it seriously as I am practicing properly writing by authoring this story. MC looks like Kirikou Rung and Elementalist is an esper ability(Superpower) that essentially makes you the avatar such as Aang or Korra. This is not a harem and will not be and this is an adventure story. Knowing that feel free to enjoy the story and I hope you all have a great day.

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Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)

keanu_eugene

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RatedOverr
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Who is the final love interest?

keanu_eugene:That's not the final love interest I recommend you keep reading, thanks for giving the story a try atleast 👍🏽
The4thWAH
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romance? harem?

The4thWAH
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nevermind i had found the answer

The4thWAH:romance? harem?
AntiNoob
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thanks for the no harem, not romance. I will support you till you finish or drop the book.

MoncaiMango
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Kirikou Rung but taller... SO basically Ogun Montgomery

Brokedepressed
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You should add tragedy to the tags.

gamabunda4873
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romance?

The4thWAH:nevermind i had found the answer
ZHIENDZ
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Now started reading this, it seems nice so far. Btw I noticed the flag are you from TT

Keanu_Eugene
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Yes I am

ZHIENDZ:Now started reading this, it seems nice so far. Btw I noticed the flag are you from TT
Pathetic_Uchiha
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there is romance

AntiNoob:thanks for the no harem, not romance. I will support you till you finish or drop the book.
lonesomeReader
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oh who is it with?

Pathetic_Uchiha:there is romance
Badnaam
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No Harem

JustRonhan
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Who is it with?

Pathetic_Uchiha:there is romance
WeAreBlank
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Freya😏

JustRonhan:Who is it with?
Onxio
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The romance is the annoying elf girl that pined after ais i belive unless the date didn't workout I never read the whole chapter to see if they got together or not

keanu_eugene
keanu_eugeneAuthorkeanu_eugene

That's not the final love interest I recommend you keep reading, thanks for giving the story a try atleast 👍🏽

Onxio:The romance is the annoying elf girl that pined after ais i belive unless the date didn't workout I never read the whole chapter to see if they got together or not
Crimson_King
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Seriously? I dont actually mind her so long as the Author doesnt make her a whire you slept with every living male

WeAreBlank:Freya😏
Crimson_King
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No harem? How can tou have no harem when the whole point of the anime is picking up girls in the dungeon?!!! On another note, i havent actually even started to read this story. Ive looked through all the reviews and although there are many good ones like always the bad are the ones that stabd out. Thay say how the MC is extremely naive and idiotic. How everyone tries to take advantage of him, even the main pairing with Lefiya is said to be trash. I suppose what im trying to ask is, is this story worth reading? I know the author always says to stick with it till the second volume but honestly i dont want to read a whole volume that doesnt interest me just so that i may actually get to read something passable.

keanu_eugene
keanu_eugeneAuthorkeanu_eugene

It's worth it the quality jumps up significantly between them and you don't have to worry about the lefiya pairing. I'm focusing mostly on the dungeon aspect of the series rather than the girls part so that's why 🤷🏽‍♂️

Crimson_King:No harem? How can tou have no harem when the whole point of the anime is picking up girls in the dungeon?!!! On another note, i havent actually even started to read this story. Ive looked through all the reviews and although there are many good ones like always the bad are the ones that stabd out. Thay say how the MC is extremely naive and idiotic. How everyone tries to take advantage of him, even the main pairing with Lefiya is said to be trash. I suppose what im trying to ask is, is this story worth reading? I know the author always says to stick with it till the second volume but honestly i dont want to read a whole volume that doesnt interest me just so that i may actually get to read something passable.
Crimson_King
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Well saying its worth it is fine i suppose. But i really really hate naive MCs i really dont want to force my self to read this storyn f thats how he is. Could i just i dont know skip to chapter 70 or something when the MCs personality is better? Also who is the female love interest? You said no harem so your choice better be a great one, if you did something like choosing Eina thatd be disappointing on a whole new level.

keanu_eugene:It's worth it the quality jumps up significantly between them and you don't have to worry about the lefiya pairing. I'm focusing mostly on the dungeon aspect of the series rather than the girls part so that's why 🤷🏽‍♂️
keanu_eugene
keanu_eugeneAuthorkeanu_eugene

Freya and volume 1 sets up some character clashes for later on as well as his magic

Crimson_King:Well saying its worth it is fine i suppose. But i really really hate naive MCs i really dont want to force my self to read this storyn f thats how he is. Could i just i dont know skip to chapter 70 or something when the MCs personality is better? Also who is the female love interest? You said no harem so your choice better be a great one, if you did something like choosing Eina thatd be disappointing on a whole new level.