Review Detail of ArchbishopOfSloth in A Chance To Become An Adonis
Review detail
I only gave 3 stars to story development and character design. This is your average novel and it is already 38 chapters on RoyalRoad and it is the extremely slow pace. I felt potential in this novel and it is fucking too normal. MC is pretty calm and his past self is plainly stupid but he became mature after that. This novel has so much potential but author only used typical trophies that you can find. The problem of this novel is too slow and the chapters are very short. I recommend future readers. come back here after this novel's chapters accumulate to over 100 chapters.
A Chance To Become An Adonis
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I agree, i was waiting for updates for a few months without news ( On webnovel it was chapter 28 ). And MC was still not developpes at all. His character wasn’t developped at all. You can call him mature but also a child. Kind and forgiving but also indifferent and stupid. Caring but also frightening. he’s a mess.
Alex_Mirabile:I agree, i was waiting for updates for a few months without news ( On webnovel it was chapter 28 ). And MC was still not developpes at all. His character wasn’t developped at all. You can call him mature but also a child. Kind and forgiving but also indifferent and stupid. Caring but also frightening. he’s a mess.
Hope you didn't feel insulted by this comment, it wasn't malicious.. Simply a feeling after reading a few chapters.. I get that since the MC will grow, he can't grow from a perfect MC
Teaisnice:Kekekekekekeke, ^w^