Review Detail of DonDenis in Ristics

Item: Ristics
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

DonDenisLv23yrDonDenis

So far so good, the intro can still be better, but the plot's direction is already looking clear within the first few chapters. Hope the story keeps improving, as the foundations are already there.

Ristics

Lepau

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LepauAuthorLepau

thx really for your comment, i stopped making new chapters, because i thought nobody would read them. But now i have new energy and i will tell you my story about paul and his adventure in the world of the Ristics

3yr