Great story and I thank the author for writing it but the characters’ actions seem forced at times also seem like you are rushing through things like some authors spend at least two chapter build up relationships. if any of that made sense😅😅😅😅😅😅
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LIKEAzureskyblue:yeah It seems a little rushed but I'm trying to build up his powers then I'm going to work on his relationships in the later chs