Review Detail of xenobilo in True Demon in MHA

It's just a fanfic, maybe some consider it of low quality as I do. I will explain the score. 1- the writing is probably with several errors since I use Google translator. 2- I will publish a chapter a day, maybe I will publish two times depending on how many I have accumulated. 3- This is the first time that I will try to finish a story, so I will be realistic and say that it may not be good. Of course, this will depend on my improvement that will happen with the practice. 4- The character (Gael) tried to make him different from the other main characters in my previous stories, who did not express many emotions. This is something I'm still bad at, but I believe I will improve in the future. I just wanted to ask them to make constructive criticisms instead of cursing me or the work. Just say the mistakes and what you didn't like. Thanks for listening.