This is a captivating story. I was hooked by your synopsis and continued to enjoy your story as I read the first few chapters. You have a great story coming along. Pros: you are a prolific writer. You take time to describe your characters in the story at hand it shows in your book. I am intrigued to learn more about Aditi, Blackwell, and their overall relationship. Cons: There isn't anything necessarily wrong with your novel. I only give constructive criticism to great novels. As I read that was just mere errors in terms of grammar and mechanics. For example your synopsis starts off with fragments. Sometimes authors like to write in fragments which is totally OK but I just wanted to point it out. Overall, Great work. I am a fan!
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