Review Detail of SleepFox in This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

As the novel has not yet reached chapter 100, I cannot give a 100% accurate opinion. So far we have an interesting story with an MC who probably wants to be like the MC of the novel "My senior brother is too steady", to be cultivating on the mountain all the time, but due to being a world of cultivation he ends up stuck in karma with others cultivators. The world panorama has not yet been fully developed, so I can only assume that either the universe as a whole was made from Pangu's theory or only his and there are other multiverses with different bases. The development of the secondary characters is concrete, although there are comments that claim that the author focuses on others other than the MC, basically they want to turn this novel into a cliché. As far as the author's grammar is concerned, I am not very opnative about this issue because I am reading from a country that does not have a native language like English. My only request was that the author be careful with the cultivation of the MC, since many novels place many stealthy encounters for their main characters and basically make them beings that every 50 chapters or 100 skips a great cultivation kingdom. Only that and good luck to the author.