Review Detail of znohtlex in The Goblin's Leveling System!

Heyyyyy!! An honest review here! I don't like to keep things in suspense so I'll just get to the point. The thing that I noticed is that the story flow was too fast. I suggest that you make the flow longer. Like, making the protagonist "suffer" in the first chapters of the story a little bit. (That's what I like to call it hehe) Although the story, plot, and grammar (the grammar beautiful I might add) is overall amazing. Keep it up Author-kun! LOVE LOVE