Review Detail of Leonardo_Black in The Goblin's Feast

I like the premise for this book. Heroic MC gets transmigrated into another race, with game like elements. Right up my alley. For me, the issue is word choice. It seems it was written in another language and translated, or the author is having a joke with us readers. The negatives do not erase the positives. With the help of a good editor this will be great. Very imaginative.