Review Detail of Ashlin_17 in Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

First of all, this is my personal viewpoint of this fanfic and is not a downright hate review. The story started of good and was quite fun to read at first, however the quality has dropped significantly ever since the Chunin exam arc (that has been stretched for way to long). One strength of this was that there were new ideas that had been utilised (A different Kekai Genkai instead of the usual Sharingan and 'sage body') instead of the oversaturated cliches that are common in Naruto fanfics. The Mc who despite his flaws was tolerable to read now acts like an aloof idiot at every moment. Whereas the conversations feel awkward to read and sometimes are just downright weird. In conclusion this started of good but fell in quality. I'll be back in 6 months and give my final review then.