Review Detail of Fletcher_Isakson in (Moved to fanfic page) Chronicles of a Nobody

Just start off with the most annoying thing the I find is a person or system that annoys the living crap out of the main character it is one of my biggest pet peeves and on top of that Alice has absolutely nothing to do with the plot you could literally take it out and there wouldn't be anything changed so basically making the novel 100 times better without even putting much effort in