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Review Detail of Yaman_Mohanty in The Wrong Turn....

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Yaman_Mohanty
Yaman_MohantyLv12yrYaman_Mohanty

The story had a very similar plot and the turns were pretty expected from the first chapter itself. Being a horror lover, this story did not have anything gory of sought but talking about paranormal as well did not do well. Everything was pretty expected. What I really wished was for creativity and newness. The characters could have also been built deeper. You could have given point of view for each and every character because being only 5 we need to deeply connect With the character to feel and empathize for the character. There was no backstory or background of the characters which made it dull. You could have described the house stronger. Sorry for this rating but take it in a positive way. Best fo luck!!!

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The Wrong Turn....

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YashimaRajpal
YashimaRajpalLv2YashimaRajpal

I'll definitely try and improve and talking about the background and backstory of the characters, it is going to be explained in the upcoming chapters..