Review Detail of Lottie_Cnozy in Before Sunrise

Hey, your fellow author here! You did a good job on the synopsis. It's short and simple, just the right amount of information on the story that keeps the readers wanting more. The last sentence was really intriguing. I've only read a few chapters and I can see that you have a wide range of vocabulary. It did well to describe the situation and the characters. The sentence structure is a little weird though it may only be my issue. It's a little difficult to understand for me. It could also be because of Ella's peculiar relationship with her family and everybody else. The mystery behind Ella's past has me on the edge on my seat to read on. I'd say, this is a good read. Very mysterious. Keep up the good work!