Alright I only read first two chapters becaue I want to sit down and read this later :)! However, I must say that this is truly a good read. Your story will definitely blow up due to it's unique humor and a good plot to follow along. Really reminds me of Kotiaro who writes Guild Wars. Those witty side thoughts, and shameless reactions make increase the quality of this book exponentially. Too take it to the next level would just require a wider use of vocabulary. Do that and you have yourself a upcoming top book.
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LIKEAyeee me is glad to hear that you'll read this through! Thanks a lot aaa <3 And ahhh you're so so kinddd to mee ;; u ;; //// I'm really happy that you enjoyed the MC's reactions to everything around her hehe! <3 I will definitely try my best to increase my vocabulary and fix my grammar! :D Truly, thank you again and have a great dayyyyy <3