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FalseProphet_
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Alright, I gotta drop seriously the story is just going downhill like I put up with the bad representation of the character but then you ran out of ideas now it is just... well this. Honestly, I don't know if the comments on the chapters are fake or not but I can't think of a reason why someone would think these last chapters were any good story-wise and I am not hating or anything I just think you need more imagination or at least think about what you want to write because right now this story is lacking in every department besides grammar But it is your story so obviously do what you want with it. You would probably be better writing an original novel because you are not very good at getting characters down and in and an original novel you can make them as ****ed up as you want and no one will complain.

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"You would probably be better writing an original novel because you are not very good at getting characters down and in and an original novel you can make them as ****ed up as you want and no one will complain." This is the best review I've read so far. Basically telling the author to create his own novel so he won't pollute other's work with his garbage. XD