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I just have to drop this review since it seems lots of readers either don't know a good novel or they are just riding author's D. I picked up this novel and only read so far because I caught up with the other novels I was reading and I use this to fill the void while waiting for new updates. Lemme go into some details Look, i know his bloodline is trash, but you don't need to force sympathy from your readers by making the whole world hate MC. I'm sure not only him has a trashy talent. The way the author makes everyone obsessed with hating him is unrealistic. Even unsuccessful Nd poverty stricken people in the real world are not treated as bad as that in that every single person that sees them insult or wants to hurt them. It just makes the novel seem immature or forced. I was about to drop it till I saw that reviews for the novels weren't bad and managed to continue. People could just ignore him or let it be a few bullies at most that deliberately make it difficult for him. His parents hate him for just having a trash talent, his brother does, I'm sure his neighbors does, the author made people on the road despise him for smelling, just entering the school attracts a number of people looking at him with hate. That just feels inorganic as far as I'm concerned, Nd it's details like this that reduce the quality of a novel. Another thing is that the MC is good at everything some how. Even in games, he is still the best. He beat a pro several times after learning the game within 2 days or so. It's just unnecessary Nd makes it look cheap. In a chapter where they had a test for entering an organization, people realized that he could see the traps and then those that didn't believe him decided to walk on their own and fell into it. Not too long thereafter, I don't think it's even up to an hour before he decides to stop for some reasons unknown to them. Yet again, the author can't but add people that don't believe him and keep walking. And of course, you can guess the result. It's as if the author can't show MCs prowess without adding dumb cliche characters. It gets tiring at a point. Like, these guys just saw some people get disqualified for ignoring him and then they go right ahead to do the same. Another thing author does is that he writes as if the world starts from MCs point of view. Let me clarify what I mean. In that same test that I just talked about. Quite a number of people knew it would take more than a day to do the test. But then for some reason only MC thought of bringing food in the storage button. Even if no one knew it would take more than a day, people that have storage buttons should normally have rations such as protein bar or supplements for emergencies. It doesn't make any sense that nobody is wise among about a 1000 people. And some of these people are from influential families that should have idea about general things to know about the test. Why must the author always make everyone else stupid in order to make the MC look smart? The only excuse I'll have given for this is that getting a storage button is not easy for the populace. But it doesn't seem that way. Gustav didn't have just because of the way his family treated him. At least his brother had and they are middle class based on inference. So, I really don't see why no one else could think of bringing food. What made it worse and what I was referring to as author writing as if the world starts from MCs view is when the supervisor seemed surprised that he brought food. Are you telling us that he is the first person to bring food in all the exams that have happened? That just feels lackluster. If instead the supervisor had nodded and made a comment of him being prepared or well informed and didn't have any surprised reaction. That'll have made more sense. Anyways, I've overdone this but i just had to rant.

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