Review Detail of Unruh_ in The Bloodline System
Review detail
Probably a good read for those of you who do not care about correct english. There are tons of mistakes, which is pretty infuriating for me. It just ruins the story for me. What I personally didn't like, too, is the way the stuff was written - you can already see that this was written by an amateur. For example, the backstory of the MC. He is called 'trash' and trampled upon just because his bloodline isn't the best. Even the teachers and the parents of his do so. So basically, it's like the whole world turns its back on the MC. It sounds like a fantasy that I had in my daydreams in the 8th grade. It just bothers me - it is unrealistic that the teachers call the people who don't have a good bloodline trash. Firstly, that destroys the meaning of the word "teacher". A teacher is supposed to guide their students and give them stuff to learn, which includes supporting them on their education, which isn't possible if you arrogantly look down onto some students of yours. The setting here just seems forced and a bit too extreme for me.
The Bloodline System
TimVic
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Out of thousands of novels in the site he got a point tho for being top15 consistently with less than 300 chapters. Compared to the majority the book has a great potential with broad directions so just give credit when credit is due .
Unruh_:😂😂😂 I can't even bother replying to the stupidity in this statement..
A ton of mistakes? lol, maybe you read the wrong novel. I agree that there may be some grammar mistakes since an author can't write without making mistakes but saying there are tons of mistakes... lol, maybe your eyesight is just bad. If there are mistakes why didn't you point them out, because when readers notice mistakes in some places they point them out and I make sure to correct those errors after seeing the comments. You didn't do that, instead, you came over here to complain that there are tons of mistakes... TONS lol
An author can't write without making mistakes, correct, but he can take the time afterwards to correct them instead of leaving them as they are and seeing no problem with it. And maybe, and maybe if I'm too bored for my own good, I will take it upon myself to point out all the mistakes in the first 50 chapters or so. But right now, I see no use in doing so actively, as you and your business has nothing got to do with me and the novel too, as I'm not planning to read something I don't like. What I also forgot to point out (or didn't ?) in my original review, was, that most of the writing seemed quite immature and (that, I did point out) like a 8th graders fantasy. I am more attracted to works with is written by experienced authors, and some other readers probably are, too, so this novel is a hard-pass.
TimVic:A ton of mistakes? lol, maybe you read the wrong novel. I agree that there may be some grammar mistakes since an author can't write without making mistakes but saying there are tons of mistakes... lol, maybe your eyesight is just bad. If there are mistakes why didn't you point them out, because when readers notice mistakes in some places they point them out and I make sure to correct those errors after seeing the comments. You didn't do that, instead, you came over here to complain that there are tons of mistakes... TONS lol
If I had corrected everything in the novel up to where I have read, we would have a different novel. Sometimes, the sentence structure in general, although correct, bothers me, and sometimes, the use of words bothers me, and sometimes, the spelling bothers me. As for why I have decided to talk about this in my review? That's because I want to voice out my honest opinion on this novel. As for now, there are mistakes in it, you cannot deny that, and that bothers new readers like me who are more familiar with the work of more experienced authors. Correcting your mistakes is not my job. Get an editor or something.
TimVic:A ton of mistakes? lol, maybe you read the wrong novel. I agree that there may be some grammar mistakes since an author can't write without making mistakes but saying there are tons of mistakes... lol, maybe your eyesight is just bad. If there are mistakes why didn't you point them out, because when readers notice mistakes in some places they point them out and I make sure to correct those errors after seeing the comments. You didn't do that, instead, you came over here to complain that there are tons of mistakes... TONS lol
oh, and maybe there not "TONS" of mistakes in the novel, but there are still that many that I can consider in my point of view as "TONS". There is also a rhetorical device called "Exaggerating", I believe, you might want to inform yourself about it.
TimVic:A ton of mistakes? lol, maybe you read the wrong novel. I agree that there may be some grammar mistakes since an author can't write without making mistakes but saying there are tons of mistakes... lol, maybe your eyesight is just bad. If there are mistakes why didn't you point them out, because when readers notice mistakes in some places they point them out and I make sure to correct those errors after seeing the comments. You didn't do that, instead, you came over here to complain that there are tons of mistakes... TONS lol
Unruh_:An author can't write without making mistakes, correct, but he can take the time afterwards to correct them instead of leaving them as they are and seeing no problem with it. And maybe, and maybe if I'm too bored for my own good, I will take it upon myself to point out all the mistakes in the first 50 chapters or so. But right now, I see no use in doing so actively, as you and your business has nothing got to do with me and the novel too, as I'm not planning to read something I don't like. What I also forgot to point out (or didn't ?) in my original review, was, that most of the writing seemed quite immature and (that, I did point out) like a 8th graders fantasy. I am more attracted to works with is written by experienced authors, and some other readers probably are, too, so this novel is a hard-pass.
TimVic:The novel gets a hard pass from you but it's one of the top novels on the siteimage
