Review Detail of Dugzaw in Choices: Want Me

You have a dark yet captivating story here that I am excited to review. Here is just my constructive criticism! Hope this helps! Pros: Just from the first passage, I can tell you write with your imagination and your visuals. The immense detail and imagery made the reading easier and tragedy all the more real. Learning about the protagonist's tragic incident with his parents was disturbing yet written well. I saw it all unfolding in front of me. Your main character is eerie yet almost charming as there is little to know about him in the beginning. This bit of ambiguity aids the darkness of the plot. Cons: The synopsis, in my opinion, could use a bit more diving into. I do enjoy the minimalism, but all I got out of it wad a man with a scar who has no ability to show emotion. It does not necessarily grab the reader. I suggest maybe adding the family tragedy into the synopsis or the protagonist's goal! Great work overall! I added this to my library!