Review Detail of ssfx3yuchens in Daughter of zor

Disclaimer: This is a honest review. I have read all chapters (Chapter 6/posted chapter 8) in this story and I like the plot of the story, however there are a few suggestions I would like to inform the author: - some paragraphs tend to be very long and may prove stressful to read for app users. - some sentences are lengthy, as well. Good points: Simplicity of words, easy to understand and good introduction of characters. Noticed that there isn't a lot of vulgar language in the story, which I like. I'll be sticking around to read more. Some sentences are missing a "." at the end but easily fixed. In overall, I like the idea of a 'magical world' and academy life.