Review Detail of xSaintPablo in The Balance in the Force [On Haitus]

I’m start of by saying that the story confused the ever living **** out of in the beginning. He goes through some sort of trials In His soul form, and some random rob decides to give him some wishes, which were Stark level intelligence, force sensitivity, immunity from dark/light side influence and extreme regeneration. Well first of, we see him for some odd reason get ALL the memories of the sith/Jedi and their knowledge. And I’m saying this with absolute confusion, the extreme regeneration? Never used. Tiny stark level intellect? Apparently irrelevant. And the whole hatred for Jedi with his commando clones? Utterly ridiculous in such a early phase, and don’t even get me started on the whole Selene “plot” the author is doing! It’s literally the most forced, cringeworthy and utterly retarded love story I’ve ever read. I had to quit reading this after he FORGIVES her for it first of all, and that whole thing with her bursting into the high council and forcing herself on him? Yeah that made my face literally twist in cringe