I'm at 260 and somehow I feel like there's already so much filler, mainly the interaction between the MC's friends feel like filler. I find the powering concept to have a lot of potential, but how naive the MC is really bummed me out. Might just be because I'm looking for something with deeper meaning than a comedic relief. Can someone also let me know if the writing style going to change to a more serious tone or is it going to stay comical throughout the rest? I really want to give it another chance but I'm a lil skeptical now.
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