Review Detail of Chillyy in Affinity:Chaos

Item: Affinity:Chaos
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

ChillyyLv143yrChillyy

I feel like this could be a gem if the author plays his cards right. Characters are fun, stability of updates is great, but the writing can be chaotic sometimes to the point that I don't really know what's going on. Especially during POV changes. But hey nobody is perfect, right? So dear author I would recommend getting an editor because this novel has a LOT of potential and chaotic writing may scare potential readers away. Much love! ♥

Affinity:Chaos

Springs_Halo

Liked by 37 people

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Springs_HaloAuthorSprings_Halo

Thanks for review. I'm particularly grateful since you pointed out some of my flaws. This is my first time writing so I'm always happy if people tell me my flaws that way I'll improve further in my writing later on. Thanks for reading and I hope you stay till the end [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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ChillyyLv14Chillyy

I will stay as long as the story is good. Don't burn yourself out! I see a lot of authors do that. They publish a lot of chapters a week and the quality of the story drops significantly. Don't be afraid to take a break every once in a while.

Springs_Halo:Thanks for review. I'm particularly grateful since you pointed out some of my flaws. This is my first time writing so I'm always happy if people tell me my flaws that way I'll improve further in my writing later on. Thanks for reading and I hope you stay till the end [img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr

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"because this novel has a LOT of potential and chaotic writing may scare potential readers away." What can they say they gave a affinity for chaos

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