Review Detail of EternalCircle in Affinity:Chaos
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Very basic beginning, but that's fine. What isn't is the Gary Sue MC who has no emotional baggage despite being traumatized at 12, constantly bullied, and oh, trains with no goal or motivation, not even sadness or to escape from his predicament. You know the guy who at 15 looks all muscular because his parent casually mentioned excercise once, the guy who never hurts anyone because "good guy is lawful good, not hormonal teenager," and of course, is always upbeat.
Affinity:Chaos
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I don't really think I can, there are some generic qualities, he is kind, hard working... that's about it. I think a little smarter than average, but many novels with a child/teen mc will do that just to help progress the story. The main reason I called this mc a Gary Sue is because there are no negative qualities, he doesn't have issues with what should be traumatic events, he doesn't get sad over losses, he is just... perfect.
DaoistubDBU4:Can you give me an insight into mc's character? is he smart, cold, doesn't trust anyone, and a good planner, or is he just a little smart kid who has a problem with feelings, trusts everyone, and is cute with everyone?
EternalCircle:I don't really think I can, there are some generic qualities, he is kind, hard working... that's about it. I think a little smarter than average, but many novels with a child/teen mc will do that just to help progress the story. The main reason I called this mc a Gary Sue is because there are no negative qualities, he doesn't have issues with what should be traumatic events, he doesn't get sad over losses, he is just... perfect.
DaoistubDBU4:Can you give me an insight into mc's character? is he smart, cold, doesn't trust anyone, and a good planner, or is he just a little smart kid who has a problem with feelings, trusts everyone, and is cute with everyone?
