Review Detail of thesupremeowl in Strongest Talent in Naruto

The story is well written and the author seems to know what he is doing most of the time. The fact that he explores things that are not explained in the canon shows promise and I hope that he will become more creative with time. The thing that worries me most is the fact that the author is determined on having Kushina and Mikoto as his wives which will lead to some problems in the future. The main story of Naruto is mostly based on the fact that Naruto Uzumaki is an anomaly in the ninja world and his existence interferes with a lot of things that happen in the plot. The existence of Itachi and Sasuke are quite detrimental in my opinion since the Uchiha massacre is a very important part of the plot's development. I believe that the authors inspiration of making the MC join Akatsuki is really good, but I don't believe it will make an interesting story, because playing double agent in Naruto seems boring. I like Kushina and Mikoto, but I like the older and more mature version of them. And I mean the version which has gone through the hardships of life. Kushina who has Kurama sealed inside of her and has to carry that burden, while Mikoto who is a loving housewife, who was basically forced into marriage, but doesn't mind sacrificing herself for the future of her children and clan. Why would the author change such big part of the story and yet follow every other aspect so closely, like it will have a big impact on the story if Sasori doesn't become a tragic character and joins Akatsuki. He even changes the character of Konan, which leads me to think that he will change Nagato and make the whole story look like a Slice of Life instead of a creative AU of Naruto. Still I gave a somewhat high score, because I'm satisfied with most things, while my only worry is the future of the story.