OP MC STEROID STORY, GENERIC THERE IS NO HOPE OF UNIQUE WORLD BUILDING NO HIGH STAKES NO LOSS NO WRITING QUALITY 99% SURE HE WILL ALSO INTODUCE USELESS CHARACTERS TO KEEP THE PLOT ON THE LIFE SUPPORT SYSTEM IF YOU ARE GOING TO READ A STORY, READ DARK KING ALTHOUGH IT HAS SOME FLAWS IN PACING ITS RECTIFIED. im done shouting. writer im sorry for doing this and if you really want to write a story put your soul into it, yor character does not have op powers to succed you need to introduce real life elements, he does not have to be anything just let loose you imagination, and lastly take it slow.
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