This is a great work written by a fairly experienced author. The grammar is great, hardly any mistakes at all. Definitely top quality. Despite the few chapters as of now, you can get some insight into characters and their personalities. The protagonist is pragmatic, benefit-oriented, probably evil which is great. There are too few chapters to rate Update Stability, Story Development and World building but from the quality of writing and the author, I'm rather optimistic. All in all, I highly recommend it.
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