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Review Detail of Petuh_Gasaebich in God´s Eyes

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Author keeps giving spoilers for what will happen next. Why would any sane person do that? It ruins the reading experience and immersion! Something like "Jason went to the bath. What he didn't not know, is that he will die a horrible death tomorrow! Also, Dumbledore dies!". Almost every chapter ends like this where I'm currently reading. Do not reveal information that we should not know, it's as simple as that! There are many better ways to give reader a hint, than throwing spoilers in their faces. A great story other than that.

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God´s Eyes

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Jayden_orgin
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It’s foreshadowing