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Review Detail of Volvo_62 in God´s Eyes

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those lines about the protagonist being a smart pansy and the rest of others are dumb as a log just to highlight him is really hard to read,it is too extreme and to be honest cringe.When he himself doesn't act that smart or mature The narrative is not that good with a lot of unnecessary immature cursing at random things.But the plot is nice and I liked most of the support character

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I understand your points, but I do believe that I portrayed the MC quite decently (according to his age) as he acts quite mature for being young. Of course he has flaws, but this is something perfectly normal as he has to grow physically and mentally